DYING HEART

by ANDRE AQUINO   Sep 21, 2007


Can you acquire me an extra heart?
So if I die I will give it to you and be your part.
Instead of crying when the time I depart
Draw our story and make it an art.
You smiled at me and begin to cry
And you told me to hang on and not to die.
For I believe that this is my destiny
I thank everything you did and to your sympathy.
You hold my hands and hug me tightly
And reminds me all and to live contentedly
I shed tears when I heard but what should I do?
God limited my life to be with you.
Live your life to the fullest,
And make it on your own and do your best
For I'll be sad if you will not obey
Be sure to strive to your happiness
And forget this moment that brought you sadness.
Find your destiny in the future
And choose the right girl that will love you sure..
Goodbye for now and be happy
This is my last word before I leave this world safely
Honey I love....

WRITERS NOTE:
I was an artist.. and my girlfriend love poems
I wrote it for her as if she was the one who wrote it.
Remembering those last moments with her,
It was really sad, I felt that I was dying too..
When she closes her eyes because of pain,
I also felt it..
I love my girlfriend so much..
The last stanza of the poem is the word "I LOVE YOU"
But she failed to complete it...
I want to say I love you too but God wanted it that way
Where ever you are we will meet soon in afterlife.
I love you..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i don't really read much love poems..well i don't why, this one renders a great passion for love. expresses true emotion and such caring for a person..and for me its really great!

    Keep it up!

    Well from phil?
    haha..me too..
    if you have time check any my piece
    thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by ANDRE AQUINO

    This piece is just an imaginary poem... but who will know... in the reality it really happens.. thank for voting and commenting guys.. love yah...