Wow this was so sad. Amazingly written. A lot of emotion in this and the flow was excellent. I can already tell by this poem that you have talent. Excellent piece you have here. Well done, keep it up!!

Interesting one!!!

I don't know what to say Mack, this poem has got an important msg indeed, especially to iresponsible fathers who deny their biological children. Mack, this is the same applied to me, u know, my real dad has never done me anything since I was born. I was raised by my mom even today she is the one who is responsible for what ever I need. I am in my Final year here at university, but my real dad does not care about me and he does not even care to send me just R20/R30 for my pocket. And believe what, I still using his surname. This poem has indeed made me recall this mess that my real dad is doing. Great job Mack! 5/5.

Gift.

This poem is really sad and touching but you've also shown that you have talent cause you were able to express what you feel and your emotions in a way that the person who is reading the poem feels with you.