Thanks for commenting my latest :) it made me smile. |
by Insanity
O my god I love your wrighting, it makes you look forward to something differnt, and then you jump out in the last line and turn the hole meaning around |
by kira2
Wow, I love this - |
by dreamer88
I love the ending it just made me smile, but totally can relate, i was reading it to begin and thought, this guy is in love, (yer with his beer) lol |
by tulip2dreams
Great poem really unexpected ending ... great work..keep it up.. |
by *Charisma*
Hahaha. that was a funny ending. Man...what a way to turn the feeling around. hahaha Well, that most be one very special beer you got there. I think some people call that addiction. LOL Just kidding. nice piece! |