by MeeyCie Sep 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
She walk past in a rush. |
Tragic ending here. |
by Krissymkitty
First i wanted to than k you for your comment...and i love this poem...i have been picked on all my life and that poem described how i feel when people do that...you feel like your not wanted and it hurts. |
AWESOME!! |
Awh. A sad and touching piece, stinging with truth. This is 101% relatable. A good job with flow and word usage, and telling a story. |