Awh. A sad and touching piece, stinging with truth. This is 101% relatable. A good job with flow and word usage, and telling a story.

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

AWESOME!!
i love this poem..for i feel like i can relate in so many ways..great poem!

First i wanted to than k you for your comment...and i love this poem...i have been picked on all my life and that poem described how i feel when people do that...you feel like your not wanted and it hurts.

Tragic ending here.
But things like this do happen and that's sad enough.
Beautiful, sad and tragic storytelling here.
I loved this one :)

5/5

xo Angelique