Quivering Moon Shadows (Haiku Collab)

by Angie   Sep 21, 2007


Quivering Moon Shadows (Haiku Collaboration)
By Willow and Andrea Sunny

moon spirits dancing
autumn breeze ignites shadows
whispering secrets

stars shimmer above
as creatures of the night howl
a mating love song

narcissistic flowers
adorn sweet crystal pathways
dragon flies shall sigh

moon casts eerie glow
upon the lakes still surface
hiding whats beneath

lurking creatures cry
sea stalkers, captivate souls
beauty sighs softly

shadowed by the leaves
haunting night owls perch on limbs
hooting in the breeze

**Thanks Sunshine, its always a pleasure writing with you, I love you, my sista!**

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    WOW that was great, wonderfully written and words captured me , took me to a little fishing pond in a late evening , so wild and yet so real, thanks for sharing,,,Your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    So beautiful. A string of haikus formed by two of the most beautiful poets on this site. I really don't know what to say except this was breathe taking. You both have a way of veiwing nature that not many people do and you put it into poems and paint such vivid imagery. Well done to both of you. ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    You two did an awsome job with this string of Haiku's...beautiful...beautiful...beautiful!! Did I say this piece was beautiful!!?

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this collab is just breathtaking! Whole poem is beautifully written, each haiku is great and I love the imagery that you two created. Amazing poem, truly amazing!
    5/5 from me

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Wonderful poem with sooo great and vivid imagery. Whole piece is simply breathtaking, you two write the most beautiful poems about nature.
    I like a lot the atmosphere that you created in this one.
    Well done!

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