An excellent work, a stringed symphony of Haiku Mastery. Very enjoyable read. I really liked the sixth Stanza and its ending.
Peace And Blessings

Wonderful poem with sooo great and vivid imagery. Whole piece is simply breathtaking, you two write the most beautiful poems about nature.
I like a lot the atmosphere that you created in this one.
Well done!

Wow, this collab is just breathtaking! Whole poem is beautifully written, each haiku is great and I love the imagery that you two created. Amazing poem, truly amazing!
5/5 from me

You two did an awsome job with this string of Haiku's...beautiful...beautiful...beautiful!! Did I say this piece was beautiful!!?

So beautiful. A string of haikus formed by two of the most beautiful poets on this site. I really don't know what to say except this was breathe taking. You both have a way of veiwing nature that not many people do and you put it into poems and paint such vivid imagery. Well done to both of you. ~Mel

WOW that was great, wonderfully written and words captured me , took me to a little fishing pond in a late evening , so wild and yet so real, thanks for sharing,,,Your friend Tracy d 5/5