Comments : Paper full of final goodbyes

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful job! Keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Love the way you repete the 2 lines in alternate at the end of each verse then bring them together at the end. awesome poem well done

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    Great ideas and concept

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Great poem and the rhyme scheme is clever too. Keep writing.

    "Paper full of final goodbyes"

    I LOVED that line. ^^^^^^^^^^

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I didn't like this as well as the others, because the flow was off. but, I'm not a big fan of Villanelle's.

    The poem itself though, minus the flow was amazing. When you take it line by line it has intense meaning and the word choice is great.

    4/5