So long

by Lisa   Sep 21, 2007


Hello
True love we meet
I have waited so long
For you to sweep me off my feet
Somewhere in the darkness things all went wrong
Head in my hands I feel defeat
Tryin now to stay strong
I have been beat
So long

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Good job
    loved the flow
    and the structure
    very unique
    i loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by turtle

    Although i had to read it twice to get the flow, it was really great!.. :) It was simple yet so full of emotion..

    great job! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    Great piece of yours

    thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Different but was amazing well done!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Lovely poems you penned here, so heartfelt write, even though simply, you expressed them well within beautiful emotions, Breathtaking written!

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