Mystical Shadow Dirt (Collab)

Hey great poem i thought i had great imagery and the wording was great too! :) keep it up

--emz--

The imagery here was so powerful and deep. Each sentence was packed with emotion and each word was important and held a meaning. Another wonderful write *5/5*

Wow. i dont know what to say, but WOW.
i loved this, the whole piece was just
awesome, although it was short, you
expressed so much, and the imagery was amazing. greatly written and i love collab's.
a def 5/5 from me

nikki

Ooh! This is an exquisite collaboration work. The atmosphere created was thick and majestic. Vocabulary and imagery was right on point. Fluid, captivating, mysterious. I especially loved these lines:

"Sapphire moonbeams hypnotize
Twinkling gems dot blackened skies"

Excellent!
Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Wow, this collab is excellent, with so dark atmosphere. You wrote whole poem greatly, with powerful wording, creating truly vivid imagery.
My favorite stanza is:

-Mystical phantoms desire flames
Vile Hellions play cruel games
Evil stalkers spitting names
Lusting lads seek out fair dames-

Very captivating piece.
Well done
5/5 from me