How can this not have comments!!
I actually really loved this, it was so refreshing to read a nice choccie poem! lol
Great flow
5/5
*Gem*

Ohh this was a great something to read,lol I laughed threw out this. Great Job. 5.5

Wow, zahra,I loved this poem and it is really wonderful.
so sorry my comment was so late, but I thought that I have made a comment for it.
well done friend.