by Kalee Sep 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Come chiudo i miei occhi. ..... |
by Jenna
Very well written dear! i really like the repeating you did...5/5 Keep it up!!! |
I like your use of repetition. It's very effective. |
by Janessa
At first i didn't know what the hell u had rote until i scrolled down.....i'm a blonde...ha ha |
by Han84
Is tht the david you wrote about who has commeted?? yeah looks and sounds good |
by David
I like how you wrote it, it was better in the text tho, more feeling somehow. |