I really liked it.

You have amazing talent you really do. Your poems are so strong and so full of emotion and the flow is always flawless. As well as you always keep the stanzas short thats hard to do. Again amazing job!

That is a really deep and heart felt poem.keep up the good work

Nightmares war
Inside my mind
Reminding me of when
Everyone left me behind

To me that was the best stanza of the poem expecially the first line "nightmares war" Something about it hit me hard. I wasn't really keen on how you ended this. It just didn't hold an impact on me. The flow of your poems is spot on and I like that to me sometimes your word choice is too simple but at times it works really effectively. None the less a good effort. ~Mel

I can relate, and I loved the title.

Your poems are awesome! I so can relate to this one! I give it a thumbs up!

Hey i love this poem itz really emotional keep it up 5/5 :)

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The imagery here is so vivid and effective from the first line. You grabbed my attention with the captivating beginning and kept it through the whole poem. This piece is filled with greatly described emotions and descriptive stanzas.
Well done!

Thats incredible keep it up 5/5

Not bad actually.i like ! <3