Wow thats really sad but well written. good job. The emotion was embedded deep in this piece.= )

Cory

I'm so sorry that your having to go through something this hard =( If you ever need someone to talk to the people here are always very kind =) But anyway, this poem was so full of deep pain, sadness and confusion that the reader actually feels it ^_^ I always love when I can feel the emotions of a poem ^_^ I hope everything works out for you and gets a little easier to handle ^_^ 5/5
Rhea