Dream Thieves

by Teria   Sep 22, 2007


Dream Thieves.

Woefully the dandelions sway opposite the wind,
creating friction from earth's natural ways.

Deliberate, wishful thinking causes but a mess
as each individual figures it's but a phase.

Since, not a trueful plant could ever condradict
the thoughts ot nature's intelligent mind.

With facts upon facts, they realize the truth..
there is not an answer to even find.

Dream thieves have came and stolen our way,
taken us way back, back before our day.

And, thoughts they lift us way too high
as the wind let's out the loudest, most awful sigh.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece. The flow is smooth, the rhyme scheme excellent and some fantastic images. The first stanza and the last stanza are very powerful.

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna

    This poem is great! the words && everything were just very good. i give you a 5/5...i really like this poem A LOT! it had an intresting concept and everything...KEEP IT UP!

    Jenna

  • 17 years ago

    by Lisa

    I actually had to read this one about 3 times before I actually understood it. It really made me think, which I really like. 5/5