The hidden Field

by evil   Sep 22, 2007


One day as I was walking my dog happily down the marvelous river,i approached a strange pathway leading into a small pack of woods. with the smell of fall leaves making erratic patters as they fall to the ground. i walk into tremendous amounts of spiderwebs. I find a field of beautiful roses, the smell over-whelming , i want to pick them and keep them , put them to use as an out-of-the-ordinary house decoration,, but knowing something dark roamed the flowers i couldn't, I thought that the smell of rain approached over me,then the sight, the feeling of it cold, yet marvelous, the roses becoming wet ,became more beautiful, as the sun glistens upon themas they begin to dry, slowly, All of a sudden a single rose fell to the ground, I quickly ran to grab it dodging the shadowy creature walking in front of me, As i picked the rose up suddenly pricked me The roses glimmer to beautiful to drop,I smiled and ran home, The dog trying to catch up to me

~Connor~

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  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like this. but the part where u say the thorns being a razor should be at the end explaining it a little more. then that way ur poem cn staay a poem without any explaining. and if somebody dosent get it then they read the bottom. thats what i do. but i understood it. its unique. hope u can come check out mine sometime.

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