by So Wrong its Right Sep 22, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Tick, tick, tick, the clock is tocking |
Excellent, I hadn't read anything like it before... :) really well written |
Very well written, very unique in the way you write. good job! |
Ah! I think this is wonderfully and uniquely penned. It was simple, but elegant, and holds more depth than meets the eye. Good rhythm, |
by ECILA ice
Honestly i'm kindda confused with the real meaning of it.. or am i just looking in a deeper side of it? Ok correct me if i'm wrong based on my own comprehension.. you have less oppurtunity but you never give up to attain your dreams? (is that so? well if it was then you have great meaning of poem).. this confused me a bit but i like the concept of it kindda unique.. |
by Lisa
Very well written. Keep up the good work!!!!!! |