The feeling

by katie   Sep 22, 2007


She feels as though she could walk on air
The love that she feels tastes like a big apple pie
Its sweet and spicy like a Mexican meal
It sounds like children enjoying life

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  • 17 years ago

    by turtle

    That was nice and the comparison was cute... but i think it would be better if you made it a bit more longer to establish the "feel" of your poem.