Suffer
by shawn hoskins Sep 22, 2007
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Alcohol brings on my madness, loved ones suffer full of sadness, wish i could rid myself of this pain the reasons i put everyone through this i find it hard to explain, so i try to stay sober i made it through another day, but will tomorrow bring sunshine or will darkness have it's way, all i can do is pray |
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15 years ago
by Good Enough
From AA i learned u can only take it one step at a time. this poem is fiiled with sadness and also happiness cause u r taking it one step at a time. its a really good poem again. thanks for the read :)
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16 years ago
by The Queen
Ok..I wont anymore comment about how you constructed it..As I have noticed, your poems were all written this way and I must admit somehow unique. It was short but each subsequent line has something to do with the previous that persuaded me to go on reading. Very neat and flawless written and I love how it rhymed somehow cute..Good Job..
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16 years ago
by Empathy
I think that the flow stayed with this poem precisely from start to finish. I really think that there is also plenty of opportunity for a stronger and better word choice, but that does not push me away from this poem. I liked reading it. I thought it was very short and simple but well done. Nice work.
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16 years ago
by victoria
It is really good
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17 years ago
Nicely written
5/5
I wish my fam would turn to god instead of the bottle
