It started off a little shaky but you pulled it off. great job |
by OHgreenman
I reallly liked this piece and the emotions flowed throughout this wonderfully penned piece. Great write!! |
by Melpomene
This poem was quite sweet and beautiful. It was truely heart warming and showed beautiful emotions which you portrayed in depth into this piece. From the start you had me hooked and kept me right into until the very end. Such an elegant piece. Well done on creating this. A great read. ~Mel |
Andrew, |
by Cindy
Great job on this piece Andrew. Word choices and imagery are both great. |