Comments : Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good strong ending, well written poem xx

  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Nicely penned. The repetition of some words really worked well in this piece, and the ending was good. Wonderful job!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Your not alone..im here with you :)
    i like the poem!