Finally, a new poem that has correct spelling and grammar, LOL. I really liked this, it was a great read. You used powerful imagery to really portray your emotions and kept it personal while also keeping it so that readers will be able to relate to it, I like that. The only thing was that the flow was a little off at some parts, nothing too serious, though.

"Got caught up in your heart beat once again
Only if I could see- it wasn't beating to mine"

^^ LOVE those lines, amazing.

5.5
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