This was good 2. Umm I personally think that u should make it longer cuz so fr it's really good. I would give it a 5/5 if it were longer but i'm giving it a 4/5 cuz it's still pretty good. =)

-Alex

Lol i already read this, and i think its really gud, i agree with teh guy above tho, shudda made it longer, gud job tho

I like the effort to try and shed some light on living in the streets, its nice to know that some people still remeber there are people just like them out there