by Twisted Heart Sep 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Enchanted, though my heart may seem tonight |
by My Decadent
As I've said before, you're very good at writing in fixed forms. Other than that, again, the rhymes and flow were awesome. |
Once again, amazingly well written. The first stanza was my favourite, but the whole thing just flowed so well. |