Very good! I like it.

Ahh amazing! I just loved how you called pain she, brilliant. The title again helped me with it, making all clearer.I really like it how you use title for it! Imagery strong and it had a sad tone to it.
Enjoyful read!
5/5 Keep up!

I really liked your poem it is short but to the point you still paint a picture of what is going on. well thanxs for the comment. keep up the work, i like the style you write.