by Lisa Sep 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You've been taking from me, |
I thought this was very well written. excellent work. the message was so ture 5/5! |
by Kaila
Aww soo very cute |
Lovely! I think this is a well written piece, full of raw and stinging emotion. The first stanza was great, and hooked me right in. Great flow and word usage in the telling of a story. Nicely penned! |