Lovely! I think this is a well written piece, full of raw and stinging emotion. The first stanza was great, and hooked me right in. Great flow and word usage in the telling of a story. Nicely penned!

Take Care,
Smiles,
*N

Aww soo very cute
and from the title not what i was expecting
wonderful write

I thought this was very well written. excellent work. the message was so ture 5/5!