Powerful, but the lack of description and grammar really brings it down. The poem is strong, but without grammar, it is harder for the reader to really understand what is being said. And, the ending needs a little stronger of a kick. The poem was strong, the ending should leave the reader in shock. Anyways, I did enjoy reading it, just needs a few minor adjustments.

5.5
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Wow. this poem. .just. .
completely explainz the situation im in.
&& this was short. but. so full of emotion.
it was. .simply. .amazing. 5/5.

THIS IS GREAT!!!! I love it