Heartbreak man

by Lisa   Sep 22, 2007


Watch out for the heartbreak man,
he'll get you everytime.
He'll promise all your dreams true,
he'll run you every line.
He'll vow to you his faithfullness,
but always cheat and lie.
He'll make you think forever,
to only say goodbye.
So if you meet the heartbreak man,
you better run and hide.
For if he catches up with you,
he'll break your heart, like mine.

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  • 17 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    This is very well written..straight from the heart...awesome job,bud.

  • 17 years ago

    by Leon

    Haha... really liked it and i'm not trying to plug my own stuff (swear down) but this well reminds me of my 'the illusionsit' glad to see i'm not the only one who thinks men have alot to answer for! (even though i'm a) a man and b) not gay...) my half of the species owes your half some serious apologising.

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    This is good, I can relate. I'm sure a lot of people can, cos it's something that happens a lot. I love the flow of the poem, you got your point through even though it was short.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Honestly, at first I didn`t think that I was going to like this, but as I kept reading, you really pulled me in. :] Great descriptions, usually with short lines, it gets harder to be descriptive and pull the reader in, but you did a great job.

    "So if you meet the heartbreak man
    You better run and hide
    For if he catches up with you
    He'll break your heart, like mine "

    ^^ LOVED those lines. A great ending.

    5.5
    :]

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