by Stazifer Stazington Sep 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Hollowed out |
This one did a lot for me, but at the same time, didn`t. I liked the way it was written, but by the end of the poem it was a little too hard to follow along. The descriptions, though so few, were great...however, I think a little more should have been put into it. I did like the imagery, though. |