My Heart

by Stazifer Stazington   Sep 22, 2007


Hollowed out

like a drum...

slowly

churning

pumping

thin blood;

through my

weakened veins...

hot.

in my sepulcher;

dreaming.

of.

you.

emerald eyes;

to take me away.

has gone away.

has been taken away.

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  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    This one did a lot for me, but at the same time, didn`t. I liked the way it was written, but by the end of the poem it was a little too hard to follow along. The descriptions, though so few, were great...however, I think a little more should have been put into it. I did like the imagery, though.

    5.5
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