Wow! Amazing last line. The imagery in this piece was so dark and sad. I loved this line

Her halo crooked on her crown

GREAT line! I wish I'd been the one to say it first. lol As always I enjoy....you must get so tired of all these comments telling you time after time how amazing everything you write is, but if it's the truth, it should be told! :)
Charisma*

The flow in this was amazing. Everything was just perfect. I could imagine everything that was being spoken about.

Excellent work.

"A fool, in love, she choose her fate
Refusing words of lies
Wisdom came, but way too late
Alone she sits and cries."

just that one stanza brings the point of the entire poem...your form was really unique and was very effective, keep it up

andrew