Within it's fury, it has beauty.
Within the winds, it is only I.
The rain is there to sooth.
Close your eyes and feel me.

I absoultley love that stanza it is very deep and emotional poem and i enjoy reading ur poems they are all so wonderful 5/5

Aww.. that was so sweet.
"I've never been so head over heels with one person.
Never felt like I was falling and it would never stop."
^ Those lines were perfect & so beautifully written.

This was a superb write. I think it was very creative to repeat that 2nd stanza, as well. The emotions were clear & strongly written & the flow was flawless. Wonderful job. 5.5

--- Stephanie Lynn .+.