The way you made me

by Jessica   Sep 23, 2007


When we met you took my breath away i knew our love would last.. we talked all the time from day to night every moment with you just felt so rite but then she took you away and i had no say, i still remember that day.. i havent forgot you i never will how do i deal without you in my life..you were my everything my shinging star i hate her for taking you away..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww this poem is sad and beautiful...i love it. great job..and im sorry if that happened to you

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Hey welcome to my club. I'm looking forward to hearing from you and your work so ill have a little look at your poems and let you know. I liked this but i think you should have split into stanzas to make easier to read :D xxx alex xxx

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