You Act Like You Don't Care

by Dustin Cole   Sep 23, 2007


The way you treat me
Its just unfair
You say you like me
But act like you don't care

You ask me to go on the trip
And then you walk away from me
And then you hung
Hung around everybody but me

Your hugs i have to ask for
You just let him take them
Its not really fair
How you treat me from him

I am so very much alone
You treat everyone diffrent from me
You say you got it bad
Well just look at me

You say you have a bad life
And you wish you would die
Well forget you
Cause every night you dont cry

I sit up all day and night
With tears upon my skin
Thinking of you
Again and again

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really like the way you write. It's simple but it moving at the same time. I love how your words flow. I love that it's so emotional and deep. Very nice work. Shanik

  • 15 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    I loved it, it expressed so much emotion and reminded me of myself and somebody else!! Great writer and poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Darya

    This is sad....but you put it down in such a beautifull way..just by reading this i can tell its true and you put a lot of efort and emotions...its just the kind of words that some people want to tell to others and i can really relate to this

  • 17 years ago

    by Mandy Grace

    Sad. i loved the poem. it kinda reminds my of my poem lost and withered. i wrote it about a guy (patrick) who doesnt c what he has right infront of him.

    mandy

  • 17 years ago

    by Mary

    Aww how sad. I really liked the flow and rhtym. And i just overall liked the whole poem. keep up the good work and plz if u have time comment some of my poems : They were meant to be part 1&2