Aww how sad. I really liked the flow and rhtym. And i just overall liked the whole poem. keep up the good work and plz if u have time comment some of my poems : They were meant to be part 1&2

Sad. i loved the poem. it kinda reminds my of my poem lost and withered. i wrote it about a guy (patrick) who doesnt c what he has right infront of him.

mandy

This is sad....but you put it down in such a beautifull way..just by reading this i can tell its true and you put a lot of efort and emotions...its just the kind of words that some people want to tell to others and i can really relate to this

I loved it, it expressed so much emotion and reminded me of myself and somebody else!! Great writer and poem!!

I really like the way you write. It's simple but it moving at the same time. I love how your words flow. I love that it's so emotional and deep. Very nice work. Shanik