Comments : I hate you

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenna Balkin

    Wow, thats a very strong vibe. Hate is a strong word too. I like the parts:
    1. and you DARE scar the innocence that i once had
    and will NEVER have again

    and

    2. standing there in the rain
    and you JUST left me to drown in my pain
    very good writing :)