As the devils fly

by Finalgravedigger   Sep 23, 2007


I'm breaking and shaking
I see darkness in the making
devils are out
and all I hear are shouts.

Flying around
their grins causing frowns
I just cant take the sound
as sins pour out.

Fire springs on the surface
shadows are what I notice
angels are now where to be found
all I see are the devils hounds.

Hell isn't so deep
its just that our sins are steep
heaven doesn't hear our cries
it becomes farther as we lie.

Dooms day draws near
hell is already here
we fall in the flames
and we pay the price with ultimate pain.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Oz would be proud to claim such a write

    FANTASTIC

  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    Wow...powerfully dark write...its for lack of better term, picture perfect as I felt as if could view the scenes of horror in my head. flowed very nicely I think...all I have is one correction..
    "angels are now where to be found"
    should be nowhere to be found.

    5/5 keep up the good work
    sh

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenny

    So terrifying, I can picture it out, by the way, amazing piece as usual!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Keath

    I like the darkness in this poem, it looks thought about. And I agree with some of the lines, hell is indeed already here.
    Some lines are better than others, but I like the poem overall. The flow is nice. (:

  • 17 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I love dark poems and this is no exception, fantastic, I look forward to reading more of your work. Timothy r

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