"Hell isn't so deep
its just that our sins are steep"

i love those lines!...the whole poem is amazing and i love the message that your trying to put out there, it is a very powerful one...great job, kep up the good work!

Humm, I like it it flowed well a nice poem 5/5

Interesting poem, I don't like few lines, and repetition of some words leaves really bad impression but whole poem has great rhythm. I enjoyed in it, nicely written.

A really dark poem enjoyed reading it

I love dark poems and this is no exception, fantastic, I look forward to reading more of your work. Timothy r

I like the darkness in this poem, it looks thought about. And I agree with some of the lines, hell is indeed already here.
Some lines are better than others, but I like the poem overall. The flow is nice. (:

So terrifying, I can picture it out, by the way, amazing piece as usual!!

Wow...powerfully dark write...its for lack of better term, picture perfect as I felt as if could view the scenes of horror in my head. flowed very nicely I think...all I have is one correction..
"angels are now where to be found"
should be nowhere to be found.

5/5 keep up the good work
sh

Oz would be proud to claim such a write

FANTASTIC