I really enjoyed this peice. It painted a great picture in my mind and the flow was flawless. I enjoyed the overall message. Great job!
5/5

Amber...

Great job 5/5

Amazing

Loved reading this poem, might have used locked instead of blocked in the third paragraph. But otherwise one of the few poems that makes you feel like the writer and makes you relate to the theme. Thik you have a pretty photo too.... and no offense Im not hitting on you. Take care and keep up the intensity