Learn to fly

Desperate feathered wings
connected to our minds
Searching for narrow goals
Our ambition's in life

--- this one was my favorite stanza, the beginning one because i can feel your voice on this one even more than on the rest. The image of the wings is a nce touch and I feel like that's why the title is learn to fly. To learn to find our goals and reach for them while we fly towards them. I'll be honest, I was expecting to read a bit more. But I do have to say that this was a good piece and that the flow was really good.

Wow I just loved the ending here. It was deep and meaningful. In every one of your poems, each word hold such meaning that without one word, the poems flow would be all wrong. Well done *5/5*

You have your own simple unique way of describing your words and thoughts and you again succeed.. you nicely, portray that every individual has a dream and goals to accomplish and wanted to achieved. Idol pare!!!

This my dear..is awesome. i don't even know what to say..the whole piece just speaks to me so much..this was a wonderfully written poem with a great meaning behind the written words..nicely done.

I really loved this poem. Its very passionate and I can tell that it was taken time on and thought out very well. Keep up the good work, I gave it a 5/5. (Please remember to return the favor as you said on the discussion board, thanks a lot!)
Rachel