Aww!! Thats so adorable Wake!! I wish i could write a poem like this :) heh I bet the angel in red would have loved to read this :P If its true ^_^ School seems to have me beat though. Keeps me so busy I barely have anytime to write any poems but i had time to write that poem you read for a clan of mine :P Heh you're a excellent writer you keep me wanting to write. Hey maybe my next one will be a love poem. Who knows :P 5/5 Loved it Wake!! ^_^

Nice work, flows nicely.
5/5

Your lines have a great rythem to them and your words are put really well together and create very nice imagery, i luv your idea in this poem its very well put together, xox lithium

The rhythm was OUTSTANDING and the titlt totally catch me eyes. OH And the words you used were absolutley beautiful. The image I get while reading is phenomenal and you just.. You wrote it so well OMG I loved it. Effing amazing!!!
~!~ VaNiLLa PaiN ~!~
AKA
**Heather**

I like it. it flowz well. :]] 5/5.

Wow, greatly written poem, with so powerful descriptions and atmosphere from the beginning to the end. You managed to create very vivid imagery, truly unique. Whole piece is great, but the last stanza is my favorite, so effective.
Keep up!
5/5 from me