by Essence Hope Sep 23, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Lying with you under the stars, the sound of my heartbeat is the only sound, |
Its always great to see work of new authors, they bring such a fresh form to the table and this poem was amazing, keep up the good work! |
Brilliant i loved how you used language to convey meaning it was really good you should post more hun :D xxx alex xxx |
by Teria
I really liked the poem. |
by Jenna
Awww...i just don't know what to say, ALL of your poems are just so beautifully written && perfect with the emotions you pour into them!!!! Very good, and again, BEAUTIFUL! keep it up! |
by Pete
Nice work, this shows so much emotion. Barring the paste errors it was beautiful. Very nice work. |