Apart from the copy and paste error this was flawless.

I love how you make me feel so warm inside, how i envy you when i read of your love for this guy, who I know means alot to you and you mean alot to him too.

I loved the wording and the way you described the times you have spent together.
The idea of a spirit was a good chpice and this poem was awesome.

Good job as always,
Love Tara-Kay
x

Ah...you keep drawing me back...your poems take his broken heart and fill it with warmth again...keep writing! You have some beautiful stuff here. And dont let your inspiration leave.

Nice work, this shows so much emotion. Barring the paste errors it was beautiful. Very nice work.
5/5

Awww...i just don't know what to say, ALL of your poems are just so beautifully written && perfect with the emotions you pour into them!!!! Very good, and again, BEAUTIFUL! keep it up!

take care
Jenna

I really liked the poem.
It's amazing, dear.
Almost flawless.
Though, I wasn't too fond of the rhyme "together and forever" the two lines did go together and fit the poem perfectly though.

5/5
Once again.

Brilliant i loved how you used language to convey meaning it was really good you should post more hun :D xxx alex xxx

Its always great to see work of new authors, they bring such a fresh form to the table and this poem was amazing, keep up the good work!

andrew