The flow was really ood for the forst 2 stanza's, somehow the last didnt have that flawlessness the other 2 did.
But i loved the style, and the wording.
This was so sad and really powerful.
You did a real good job my friend
love always,
Tara-Kay
x

I loved this, it was a little too sad for my liking though, but i am generally a happy person so i guess that may be why.

The poem itself though had good flow, actually i think the flow throughout was really great.

The wording was different and deep and powerful.

The emotion was good too.
I thought you did very well,
Love
Essie

Wow! this has a wonderful flow. I feel so bad for the man with the broken heart. this is very profound and beautiful!

Oh my gosh... this poem was magnificent! You are an extreamly talented writer! I loved every bit of it! Nothing was ever off you are so good! My favorite pasrt was the end stanza it really was intense for me!
Great work
5/5
Kaila

I think this might just be my favorite poem that I have read so far. I can really connect with it right now so that might be why but I loved it. It flowed together perfectly and the wording was great. 5/5 Keep it up!!!!

Its very difficult to work with a strict rhyming scheme, all too often people cram words in just to fit the flow, and you didnt need to do that even once, which is very hard to do, this is amazing work, keep it up

Man tah twas just beautiful. Your flow is incredible and feelings deep. definitely 5/5, keep up the good work.

Good!

for this one, its simple and the it flowed right. for the entire its very describe and the ideas were release freely on it..

keep it up!

Ditto on andrew, wtg man! check out my "dracula" lol, i think yours trumps mine ohhh lemme think 10:1 good enough? lol, DANG ITS GOOD! 11/10

VERY VERY GOOD! The only suggestion I have is to take out the word 'ever' in the second to last line. Other than that, it was breathtakingly beautiful with great wording. I'm enjoying your work a lot!
*ME*