Finally

by dAnCe4aDrEaM   Sep 23, 2007


Finally, it happened.
the moment Ive awaited
you finally said hello
the hello you debated
you changed my world
and now i don't cry
i finally truly know
that it wasn't goodbye
you were somebody
something to me
then i thought i lost it
and all i could do was dream
deep down i now know
that you do care
and we can be friends again
something thats very rare
you're still so amazing
but now being broken
is not my worry
its out of the question
so thank you
thank you for it all
for the love you showed me
even for my fall
i will never ever forget
the feelings that we had
now those feelings aren't as strong
and trust me, its not bad
just remember what I've said
you were my first love
and i still consider you
and angel from above
i don't know who you have now
but please, treat her well
treat her like you did me
love her more than words can tell
again, i thank you
for everything we had
for holding my hand, and every hug
you're an amazing lad.
also, thanks for the smiles
and bringing me up when i was low
but i really wanna thank you
for that small, simple hello.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dAnCe4aDrEaM

    Haha thank you so much! and yes, this really happened to me! all of my poems are my thoughts and feelings and things in my life! i dont write peoms that have to do with absolutely nothing, cause then i feel like its pointless!

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is soo sweet, and if it has happened to you, then you are the luckiest person i know!!!
    this is beautifully written and so honest, liked it a lot!
    5/5 x