Comments : Rhyming Name

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wonderful job loved the passion you are so amazing i wish i could write poetry as well as you do your fabulous great work
    5/5
    kaila

  • 17 years ago

    by Avan Ahmad

    What a beautiful pomes wallah dast xosh. ^_^.

  • 17 years ago

    by freshta

    Oh no
    dont say that cause our names are not rhyming baby.lol

    a beautiful poem in deed.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is pretty cool!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem goran, luv the meaning behind it, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! congrats on making 100!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem alot, so beautiful and elegant what more can I say. This took me off into my own little world almost like a dream it was soft and sweet I really can't explain the emotions in this poem. Well done on getting your Blue [P] award. Keep on writing. ~Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    its like a romantic movie, i like the story..

    keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omg goran i absolutely loved this one!!! this was different than your others, i don't know it just stood out, i'm so happy you're writing again, i always look forward to seeing your poems, i check every time i'm on, which is about every day! great poem, i always love them, and this one exceeded expectations, like all of yours do.

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww, very beatiful. It's completely different for me than the other that kind of poems. So credit for that :).Really enjoyed this. And also i just felt that it was all so clear, first poem to make me feel so. Super romantic.
    Keep it up! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Such a sweet poem :) 5/5
    I hope they find their soul mate
    written really well keep it up
    sending my love ~ peace out! xo

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily E Mehigan

    Cute. I like the idea of this poem. Nice write. <3Emily

  • 17 years ago

    by emilyy

    Aww thats sweet, cute its so cool...i love it...yay! he he 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lynzie

    Is her name lauren (i mean if this was written like about you)? i duno i was reading and that was the name that popped in my head great poem keep writing

  • 17 years ago

    by Bhavin

    A very good poem... you deserve a pat on your back... nice work... keep writing... 5/5 without any doubt.... n i really mean it...

  • 17 years ago

    by Half Heart Alicia

    OMG her name must be Loren awwwwwwwwwwww
    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Aww. :]] That was beautiful!
    It flowed perfectly, the emotions were powerful, and the word usage was great. I really loved the ending. :P Magnificent job! And congrats on making 100. :) Overall: 5.5

    --- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by kIROS DELA VEGA

    Good one... i love it again...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    And...did you find her?
    Great poem!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahh

    I love this poem its just so beautiful!!
    well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautifully Broken

    So Sweet! luvd it! xx 5/5!