Stay Away

by Jenna   Sep 23, 2007


Stay away from my family
take one step closer I'll flatten you out.

Stay away from my baby girl,
touch her ever again, I wont hesitate to go for the kill.
Stay away from my fiance's,
He'll do the same as well.

For I will protect the ones I love,
from worthless beater's like you.
If you ever say a word to me again,
I'll put you six feet under in the ground.

Back off, I'm not afraid to pay back my revenge.
All the pain you caused me for so long,
will come back and bite you in the a**.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow. I could feel EVERYTHING that you were talking about! I could feel your protectiveness and it was AWESOME! lol. Great great wonderful job.
    *~NearlyCrazy6~*

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow, I could feel the hatrrid and anger in some parts. This poem was powerful and very filled with emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    So much anger and angst.
    I was going to put that it expressed alot of emotion in this poem .. but that doesn't cut it .. This is pure, out and out passion, vengeance and such raw emotion.
    I absolutely love the intensity of this piece, as you read it you can almost sense the author getting more and more frustrated.

    Great poem.
    Loved every second of it.

    ~Pete.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Needless to say, your message was extremely powerful, but wonderful, too! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    i can see much effort, the ideas were filled with emotions. but i think there is something in this maybe, but it was great

    Keep it up!

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