by Jenna Sep 23, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Take that smirk off your ugly face, |
by NearlyCrazy6
Again. i could feel it! That was a great poem full of emotion but all i have to say is to maybe even out the lines more...but thats it. great job! |
by Pete
Well, this sound like the conclusion to the first poem i read from you. Its yet another heartfelt piece, except this one is missing a bit of the intensity. Its a thoroughly good poem to read, but seems to lack an edge. |
by xxSuicidalxx
5/5 Great poem! I love how you can feel the emotion as you read it ...very well written and i love how you stand up to him!!!!! |
by Gasttlee
Sounds like you're describing a serious psychopath, still the darkness behind it is beautiful! 5/5 |
by Veamm
Good! |