Ashes

by Anthony   Sep 23, 2007


The sun is setting
The moon is falling again
I'm beginning to lose the war
Of life that I'm struggling to endure

With the aid of love
I'm smiling the past tortures away
Even though this time I lost
I can prepare for the following day

These feelings that I live with
Risen from the ashes of my soul
Equal to my blessings and my faults
Continuing to ruin all that I live for

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  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Great poem,
    it is very well written and just amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Great ! ,
    With the aid of love
    I'm smiling the past tortures away
    Even though this time I lost
    I can prepare for the following day

    5/5
    biya

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow such a great inspirational poem.. Love it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good. well written. :]
    keep it up. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    This was absolutly amazing i loved it keep up the great work!

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