Comments : The end of a dream

  • 17 years ago

    by XlikkulMissStaciiX

    I usually Never Read Long Poems.. As Most Seem To bore Me Very Quickly! But.... With This Poem.. I read the first verse.. And had to go on.!! The more i read.. the more i wanted to see the end!! Very Sad But Yet Very Well Written!! I know You May Be Thinking.. "She's 16 WHAT DOES SHE KNOW?" Don't judge a book by its cover =]] Loved This Poem Very Much!! xx S t a c ii e xx

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Roses of green that you once did get
    For that act of love, I have no regret.

    What a beautiful sad penned..... Well expressed emotions... love's great but sometimes so painful "Remember that the best relationship is one where your love for each other is greater than your need for each other."

    Anyway this was beautiful poems, keep them coming...take care, Best wishes.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    An Amazing and beautifully written poem. With such feelings. I LOVE IT!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A beautiful poem John, my favourite bit is
    You for me and me for you
    We were one passionate soul engineered out of two.
    Love to read more of your poems
    5/5